You can see from the second page of the storyboard that the struggle / kidnao is seen from the younger sister's POV and therefore there is a direct connection with her which makes it clearer who she is when we switch to the older version of her.
Friday, 23 November 2012
Storyboard Second Draft
We have made a lot of changes to our storyboard based on feedback we have received and the experience of presenting our original storyboard. We have made some quite significant changes, the most important being moving into the POV of the younger sister to tell the story. This has a big impact on the way we present our narrative and although it was challenging at first, we now feel it is better.
You can see from the second page of the storyboard that the struggle / kidnao is seen from the younger sister's POV and therefore there is a direct connection with her which makes it clearer who she is when we switch to the older version of her.
You can see from the second page of the storyboard that the struggle / kidnao is seen from the younger sister's POV and therefore there is a direct connection with her which makes it clearer who she is when we switch to the older version of her.
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We all put our own input into the storyboard by each drawing separate post-its. This is our second storyboard as we decided to change it after a lot of consideration.
ReplyDeleteShannon Dunne
This is our second attempt at our storyboard and we have changed quite a lot of things from our first draft. Firstly, we have changed the character perspective as before it was filmed from the older sister’s viewpoint whereas now we have chosen to film it from the younger sister’s viewpoint in which we hope to be able to create through levels which we film from. Also, we have decided to allow the younger sister to see her sister kidnapped which would be the main focus in the real film.
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