Order of speaking: Hanisha, Shannon, Shannen, Georgina
Here we are presenting our storyboard first draft to our teacher. Talking through our ideas to someone else has helped to clarify them, and the discussion at the end of the presentation has given us a new direction to take our work in. It is always useful to stop at key points and see what an outside person thinks of your work, as it is easy to lose perspective on it and to miss some kwy points because you have forgotten how an outside audience may see it.
I think it will work really well the way we have cross cutting going on because it will give the audience an idea of what is going on.
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After we thought about it, we decided to take the cross cutting out because this 'flashback' is supposed to be a dream from the sisters point of view of what happened and it wouldn't work because she wouldn't actually know what the mystery man would be doing. It would also lack continuity and wouldn't make sense.
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After rethinking our storyboard we decided to cut out quite a few things in our first draft as it would become quite messy and chaotic for only the first 2 minutes. We also decided that the younger sister should be the main character so we changed the perspective that it would be filmed from. We did though keep the action going on to be a flashback from a dream which the younger sister has which is revealed near the end of the 2 minutes as we thought that this would then create a better opening for the film to continue on from.
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